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Craditz story 1st
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I liked the story, though you could organize it better.. its kind hard to to distinguish between dialogs and narrations Tongue
But it's pretty good ;D
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Craditz story 1st - by Craditz - 11-08-2011, 08:34 PM
Craditz story 1st - by Raziel_ - 01-05-2012, 03:20 PM
Craditz story 1st - by Sphinx - 01-05-2012, 08:47 PM

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