06-17-2008, 11:53 AM
As i passed by Britain Bank last night i heard talk of Undeads being sigted. It caught my attention so i stopped up and listened to the rumors. Apparently they were quite vicious if threatened. Or so the rumor was. I did not put much into it and walked away without thinking more about it.
[OOC]
The story itself is ok but it seems kinda like its written for WoW and not UO :p
Also, and this is not a bash, try to let someone proof read it when you make stories. Theres a bit of mixing between "he/she" and "his/her".
[OOC]
[OOC]
The story itself is ok but it seems kinda like its written for WoW and not UO :p
Also, and this is not a bash, try to let someone proof read it when you make stories. Theres a bit of mixing between "he/she" and "his/her".
[OOC]