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Angels of War
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In the beginning these men and women were known for being great warriors who devoted their lives to the heavens above. With every breath of air they strived for perfection and sought to find the true meaning of life. Followers and soldiers of Lord Brit’s Army, they fought day in and day out against the resurgent of evil Lord Blackthrone’s Army. Among these soldiers was a man named Malaki.

Malaki grew up in a home full of poverty and crime. With food sparse and the pains of hunger increasing, he was forced to commit theft. One day the child went inside the courtyard of Lord Brit’s castle to gather apples for his family. What the child failed to realize was that a great king was watching him. Malaki continued to gather the apples then scurried back to the streets of Britain. The king then called upon one of his greatest soldiers, Asterello, to approach the child and bring him to speak with him upon his capture. The following day Malaki stopped back by to gather apples again but much to his surprise Asterello was waiting for him. Malaki attempted to run but knew he was outmatched to a much stronger older man. Asterello escorted him to the king and waited for his next duties. The king began speaking the two. “ Why must you commit theft? Don’t you know that you are headed to a life of evil and chaos?” the king said. “For great king I must commit these deeds seeing that my family must eat,” said Malaki. While the child was pleading his case the king seen something in him that no man he knew possessed. The king replied “child if you will train under Asterello and take a oath to commit yourself to the life of order, hunger will no longer haunt you nor your family.” Unable to refuse, Malaki immediately accepted the deal seeing that his family meant a great deal to him.

Years passed and the two trained day in and day out. Asterello taught Malaki how to live, yield a sword, and how to utilize the shield. At the young age of 16 he was considered to be one of Lord Brit’s greatest soldiers. The two developed a brotherhood of trust and family fighting side by side against Blackthrone’s army. One day while hunting the two spotted a young kid beating at trees with sticks yelling and cursing loudly. They approached the kid and ask him what he was doing. “I am fighting off Lord Blackthrone’s army!!” the kid said. “Perfect” the two said. This kid was Bane.

Bane grew up in a family with noble soldiers throughout his kin. From the time he was born, war was instilled upon him. He often told of stories his father passed to him. Asterello and Malaki began immediately instilling every thing they knew inside this kid. As Bane aged they two both knew he would be a great warrior. Bane was always known for his brutal tactics in war. Some people thought that he actually carried death upon his shoulders. As the years passed the three became an unstoppable force. Never one without the other, they would fight off Blackthorne and continue to pass the word of order. The men all fought brilliant battles throughout their lives and upon there passing they were considered to be three of the most honored soldiers in Lord Brit’s army.

In the heavens above the gods of war came to speak with the three men. “With this new beginning comes great evil,” said the gods. “We wish to ask you three men to return to protect Lord Brit’s code and gather an army to prepare against the war with Blackthrone’s Army”. The three men looked at one another and nodded knowing that they must honor the code of order. These three men, Malaki, Asterello, and Bane, are known as the Angels of War….


Thanks for taking the time to read our story.

The items requested is Gold Skin and Holy White Robes.
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bump* Can anyone comment and tell if this needs improvements in areas or is it up to par?
#3

It's different... it's good... and i liked it! Wink

I guess Calabose or Lady Minax will read it today.
#4

Nicely done. The watch time for the three of you starts today. You'll be informed as soon as your watch time is over and you are to receive your items.


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