[Mystic Edge]

There's some parts I like and some parts I think could be done different, I'll explain below.

First off, I don't think that you should start by saying how all the old IN-servers shut down, it makes the shard seem like an instable place, and makes people think that thisone will shut down too. Instead focus on that it's been around for a long time and that the shard has had a long time to develop this "amazing feeling" that Imagine Nation has, and that the community has stuck with it for all these years. At least I think that would give a more positive feel to it.

It seems i was missing leading all of you on what I was trying to do, it wasn't to show that point of view nor was I trying to get people to feel that way, rather what i was trying to do is show what past history IN has had to jog some people memory as in if they remember the old shards no matter what shard they played on whether it was IN1, IN2, INR, or INX Which is why i had the banners there. It was to reflect "same community" feel if not from all 4 shards and not "someone trying to copy what they played on". I wanted people to feel this is something different from all 4 communities, not just from INR and INX and so forth. Maybe I point it out in a negative way but that wasn't what i was trying to do. I wanted to put something in the past to reflect that the same community is still here feel. I believe I should reword what i have done, but if its just all detailed description on what we have currently it may not grab the old members that played here as well. I showed my friends last night that haven't played in years and they didn't even know what i was talking about till they saw the begining. IM trying to grab peoples memories from the past as well as now from the get go. I do see your point on the shut down thing lol, I'm gonna try to reword it and keep the same format and avoid the word shutdown lol, thanks.

Secondly, the shard that Imagine Nation merged with is not named "UOX", it's named "XUO". Easy thing to mix up but worth fixing if you're keeping that part

I see, minor error ill fix that

There's also a few spelling errors but you said that you'd fix those so I'm not going to comment on that

yeah no prob

Except for that, well done! I like the music, the in-game footage and the way you let players know what makes IN stand out from all the other shards out there. [/QUOTE]