12-09-2007, 09:02 AM
The jui device sighed and showed the silhouette of a large beast.
"Come closer" said the tall man.
The beast stood up, it towered the tall man twice in size.
"I will name you 'Gomba vayan' Balim, you will be dispatched to the temple of owls.
The katlean undead have joined the humans, i want them...eradicated."
Gomba vayan looked down upon the tall man..
"Yes master"
"Is this really in our best interest?" Said a muscular roamer approaching..
"Are we devolved into using monsters now?"
"You will understand in time Lupin" said the tall man.
"Wich ofcourse means you are next"
"I dont care if my mind goes but before that" replied the muscular roamer lupin "let me say i was happy to serve you in edin"
"And you will again" replied the tall man.. "But this time we will win"
Lupin willingly stepped into the jui device and was transformed into a more enhanced form of himself..
"Seems you resisted the loss of the mind" The tall man said, "Then again you never had one"
"Lets see" Replied neo lupin, "if Evrae kseres has enough strenght left to face me"
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On the barrens of the great fortress tower of Katlean Evrae kseres looked out upon the battlefield.
The siege was already taking an hour and the demon enemy forces coming from the desert had gotten reinforcements from king yuri the husband of jui ce edin herself.
But he did not worry, after all a year back in time he had finally defeated the edin force of general lupin and had slain both lupin and Balim his powerfull bodyguard with the help of the master strategist Kiga che,
and his two expert extra tacticians and bodyguard Hanzo and Suza.
Hanzo and suza were both dispatched to the front now and kiga che had left for the mountains without an apparent reason.
Now all evrae could do was count on the victory of hanzo and suza but they were heavilly outnumbered despite a defensive advantage.
On the frontlines a man in a long white jacket wearing a weird mask approached Hanzo..
"Hanzo ce kiga che" he began "You look skinny now, not so heroic anylonger.. are you eating allright?"
"why mock me with words" replied hanzo "is your sword not enough?"
"Good one" said the man. "but i am not armed"
"Then what are you doing here in the battlegrounds?" Said hanzo.
The man placed one foot back and said "Lets just fight"
"Fool" replied hanzo "do you know who i am?"
The man suddenly dashed forward and kicked hanzo in the jaw, turned around and dashed again before hanzo could grab his sword kicking hanzo's hand down then unleashed multiple kicks into hanzo's chest..
Turned around again, hanzo unsheated his sword in a instant slash but missed by the turning and took another kick in his chest..
The man dashed back and said..
"I will put you asleep, dont worry."
Before hanzo could respond he felt the ground hitting his head...
Next to him stepped down the man, from out of a inhumanly fast jumping kick.
-
In the mountains of the desert of owls sat three men on bavaja*.
one of them held a long telescope, and turned around..
"He speaks the truth afterall.. what do you know.."
Another took the telescope and started looking trough it into the distance..
"I couldve sworn that mercenary's could not be trusted Anomis"
The first man anomis replied:
"Yes, it seems that after the famous strategist joined us mercs think twice before being unloyal..what say you roamer?"
The third man approached the hilltop..
"I think, we should dispatch the last troops before our beloved queen arrives, she wants a victory not a slaughter haha"
Anomis laughed "yes..yes..well.. lets first pay the merc for his work" and turned around walking down the slope..
"I dont trust you" said the second man to the roamer.. "but on our queens command i serve you.. again..lupin.."
"Dont worry" replied the roamer lupin.. "We have no interest in this land, we only have come for evrae's head.. Wejing."
The second man (lau wejing, royal bodyguard of queen jui ce edin) replied..
"Its not worry that makes me say that.., its conviction."
Down the slope General Anomis approached the man who had defeated hanzo.
"well well" Anomis started.."we were quite suprised you were all you said to be"
The man replied.. "Im more than that really, pretty nifty isnt it? the slope is ..why! out of sight from the other two bozos! hah!"
"what?" anomis staggered..
"Naa.." said the man "you know, getting you alone must have been the easiest job i ever took hah!"
"So thats it" replied anomis. "You are a katlean unit.. out to..assasinate me.. how clever"
"Arent you going to try to escape? must be at least 20 paces hmm.." the man replied..
"Oh.. no.." said general anomis. "I am going to kill you right here and wave your corpse to your commander"
"You would think i am just another general right? You are wrong"
"Sooo, lets see about it, dodge this!"
The katlean man dashed into anomis who had been studying the man's moves trough the telescope from afar.
"To bad" yelled anomis who swung his body to the right to return for a punch..
But the man had not kicked but unbuckled anomis his sword..then dashed into anomis again instead of kicking throwing him on the ground..
"WHAT?" anomis yelled..
"oh come on now, i wasnt even going all out you know" the man replied..
"WHO THE HELL ARE YOU" anomis screamed..
"Ah.. they call me the champ around these parts, name is Sanake"
"w...what..n..not " anomis trembled "not..not the man who..slayed..b..balim?"
"Balim and lupin actually.." replied sanake.
"But you know, now that thats all said i have no reason to hold back anymore, this is my mission my friend but im a fair guy, here"
Sanake tossed anomis his sword toward him..
"And be sure not to hold back aswell, im a fair guy, if you wound me i will yield"
"Then you are a fool!" replied anomis. "i am the master of the fire sword!"
anomis swung his sword into the air forming a sigil stepped to the left then dashed into sanake....
For a moment time stopped anomis grabbed his swords handle and smashed it right trough sanake emitting firecrisps all around the impact..
The wind followed.. Anomis turned around to the place where sanake had been in full clash..
But sanake stood three paces to the right holding his sword in a far swipe..
Anomis fell backward and the last he could see was his own abdomen..falling forward..
Anomis was slain, the great general anomis was dead.
*a bavaja is comparable to a combination of a horse and a wingless drake..
there are two types of bavajas, one is a slim kind fit for mounting, one is a fat wild type that goes berserk when it sees anything.
The fat ones are often used as rams but are rare to find so luxerious.
Thin bavajas are the most common animals in edin, they are very easy to tame for they are the most friendly human loving creatures.
They can be trained into a powerfull steed and is able to jump ravines with ease.
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"Come closer" said the tall man.
The beast stood up, it towered the tall man twice in size.
"I will name you 'Gomba vayan' Balim, you will be dispatched to the temple of owls.
The katlean undead have joined the humans, i want them...eradicated."
Gomba vayan looked down upon the tall man..
"Yes master"
"Is this really in our best interest?" Said a muscular roamer approaching..
"Are we devolved into using monsters now?"
"You will understand in time Lupin" said the tall man.
"Wich ofcourse means you are next"
"I dont care if my mind goes but before that" replied the muscular roamer lupin "let me say i was happy to serve you in edin"
"And you will again" replied the tall man.. "But this time we will win"
Lupin willingly stepped into the jui device and was transformed into a more enhanced form of himself..
"Seems you resisted the loss of the mind" The tall man said, "Then again you never had one"
"Lets see" Replied neo lupin, "if Evrae kseres has enough strenght left to face me"
-
On the barrens of the great fortress tower of Katlean Evrae kseres looked out upon the battlefield.
The siege was already taking an hour and the demon enemy forces coming from the desert had gotten reinforcements from king yuri the husband of jui ce edin herself.
But he did not worry, after all a year back in time he had finally defeated the edin force of general lupin and had slain both lupin and Balim his powerfull bodyguard with the help of the master strategist Kiga che,
and his two expert extra tacticians and bodyguard Hanzo and Suza.
Hanzo and suza were both dispatched to the front now and kiga che had left for the mountains without an apparent reason.
Now all evrae could do was count on the victory of hanzo and suza but they were heavilly outnumbered despite a defensive advantage.
On the frontlines a man in a long white jacket wearing a weird mask approached Hanzo..
"Hanzo ce kiga che" he began "You look skinny now, not so heroic anylonger.. are you eating allright?"
"why mock me with words" replied hanzo "is your sword not enough?"
"Good one" said the man. "but i am not armed"
"Then what are you doing here in the battlegrounds?" Said hanzo.
The man placed one foot back and said "Lets just fight"
"Fool" replied hanzo "do you know who i am?"
The man suddenly dashed forward and kicked hanzo in the jaw, turned around and dashed again before hanzo could grab his sword kicking hanzo's hand down then unleashed multiple kicks into hanzo's chest..
Turned around again, hanzo unsheated his sword in a instant slash but missed by the turning and took another kick in his chest..
The man dashed back and said..
"I will put you asleep, dont worry."
Before hanzo could respond he felt the ground hitting his head...
Next to him stepped down the man, from out of a inhumanly fast jumping kick.
-
In the mountains of the desert of owls sat three men on bavaja*.
one of them held a long telescope, and turned around..
"He speaks the truth afterall.. what do you know.."
Another took the telescope and started looking trough it into the distance..
"I couldve sworn that mercenary's could not be trusted Anomis"
The first man anomis replied:
"Yes, it seems that after the famous strategist joined us mercs think twice before being unloyal..what say you roamer?"
The third man approached the hilltop..
"I think, we should dispatch the last troops before our beloved queen arrives, she wants a victory not a slaughter haha"
Anomis laughed "yes..yes..well.. lets first pay the merc for his work" and turned around walking down the slope..
"I dont trust you" said the second man to the roamer.. "but on our queens command i serve you.. again..lupin.."
"Dont worry" replied the roamer lupin.. "We have no interest in this land, we only have come for evrae's head.. Wejing."
The second man (lau wejing, royal bodyguard of queen jui ce edin) replied..
"Its not worry that makes me say that.., its conviction."
Down the slope General Anomis approached the man who had defeated hanzo.
"well well" Anomis started.."we were quite suprised you were all you said to be"
The man replied.. "Im more than that really, pretty nifty isnt it? the slope is ..why! out of sight from the other two bozos! hah!"
"what?" anomis staggered..
"Naa.." said the man "you know, getting you alone must have been the easiest job i ever took hah!"
"So thats it" replied anomis. "You are a katlean unit.. out to..assasinate me.. how clever"
"Arent you going to try to escape? must be at least 20 paces hmm.." the man replied..
"Oh.. no.." said general anomis. "I am going to kill you right here and wave your corpse to your commander"
"You would think i am just another general right? You are wrong"
"Sooo, lets see about it, dodge this!"
The katlean man dashed into anomis who had been studying the man's moves trough the telescope from afar.
"To bad" yelled anomis who swung his body to the right to return for a punch..
But the man had not kicked but unbuckled anomis his sword..then dashed into anomis again instead of kicking throwing him on the ground..
"WHAT?" anomis yelled..
"oh come on now, i wasnt even going all out you know" the man replied..
"WHO THE HELL ARE YOU" anomis screamed..
"Ah.. they call me the champ around these parts, name is Sanake"
"w...what..n..not " anomis trembled "not..not the man who..slayed..b..balim?"
"Balim and lupin actually.." replied sanake.
"But you know, now that thats all said i have no reason to hold back anymore, this is my mission my friend but im a fair guy, here"
Sanake tossed anomis his sword toward him..
"And be sure not to hold back aswell, im a fair guy, if you wound me i will yield"
"Then you are a fool!" replied anomis. "i am the master of the fire sword!"
anomis swung his sword into the air forming a sigil stepped to the left then dashed into sanake....
For a moment time stopped anomis grabbed his swords handle and smashed it right trough sanake emitting firecrisps all around the impact..
The wind followed.. Anomis turned around to the place where sanake had been in full clash..
But sanake stood three paces to the right holding his sword in a far swipe..
Anomis fell backward and the last he could see was his own abdomen..falling forward..
Anomis was slain, the great general anomis was dead.
*a bavaja is comparable to a combination of a horse and a wingless drake..
there are two types of bavajas, one is a slim kind fit for mounting, one is a fat wild type that goes berserk when it sees anything.
The fat ones are often used as rams but are rare to find so luxerious.
Thin bavajas are the most common animals in edin, they are very easy to tame for they are the most friendly human loving creatures.
They can be trained into a powerfull steed and is able to jump ravines with ease.
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